The Elite Series Book One – Dragon Fusion Release!

I can’t believe it! The Elite Series Book One, Dragon Fusion, is live on all major ebook retailers. You can buy your copy now!

PURCHASE DRAGON FUSION

Amazon

Apple

Barnes & Noble

Google

Kobo

Angus & Robertson

Vivlio

El was an average fifteen-year-old kid. Who set out for a quiet walk in her small-town park to relax before having to conquer an English report. However, El never expected to see sparks fly out from her fingertips…

Totally blindsided, El learned the truth of her identity, realizing her whole life had been a lie, and she wasn’t sure she was ready for the upcoming changes.

El’s newfound powers frightened as well as excited her. Finding help from an unlikely ally, a dragon, El must decide if she should embrace her destiny or walk away from a world in peril. A spark begins to ignite within her. Will the fire that brews inside sway El in her decision to embrace her destiny?

Paperbacks will be available in the future. I will let you know when.

THANK YOU

Writing this book as been has been a wondrous adventure. I want to thank everyone who helped me in the process of the creation of this book.

Yes, this is a little late. Unfortunately, I was sick on the actual launch day. Don’t fret my Covid-19 test came back negative. It was just an infection.

With half a year left, I am working on editing Dragon Squad, which I hope to have out before the end of the year. I can’t wait to reveal the cover with you all.

Book three I am writing. If you have noticed, I have removed Book Three’s Title. I am thinking I might be changing the title, consider the direction the book is going.

Be sure not to miss out, in celebration of the book launch anyone that signs up for my Newsletter—gets a gift of deleted scenes from the book.

Yay! Happy release Dragon Fusion, this is the beginning of a fantastic series. Thank you for being apart of my adventure.

Words Not To Use, When Writing

The Emotion Thesaurus Yes, this means there are actual words when writing a novel, an article, blog post, marketing copy, etc. There are certain words to remove to make your story stronger. This allows the reader to get to the part of your storyline faster to such them into wanting to read more.

If you want your work to look polished and professional. Well, if you have used these words. You have a bit of revising to do in your story.

List of words to remove:

“One of”
“Some” this includes: Sometimes, something, someone, somewhere, somewhat, somebody, somehow, etc.
“Thing”
“To be”
“Very” – very tired (exhausted)
very sad (morose)
Adverb end with “ly” – loudly, painfully, beautifully, totally, completely, absolutely, literally, definitely,
Certainly, probably, actually, basically, virtually, really, etc.
Leading words – so, mostly, most time, in order to, often, oftentimes.
Any dialog tag – asked, said, told, replied, etc.

That (This should be removed if the sentence makes sense without it)
Just (You don’t want too many of these. If you need it to get your point across, you can keep it.)
Then (recommend using instead of or and)
Start, Begin, Begun, Began (These are an interruption to the action.)
Rather, Quite (Don’t need.)
Down, Up (Don’t need.)
Wonder, Ponder, Think, Thought, Fell, Felt, Understand, Realize (These removed the reader.)
Breath, Breathe, Inhale, Exhale (these are two commonly used.) Recommend look for link {The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi available on Amazon.
Shrug, Nod, Reach (try to use more action words instead of these) Recommend you have another reader read to make sure it contains action.

These words are not necessary. They slow down the flow of the story, which takes the reader out of the storyline. You don’t want this to happen; they could lose focus, allowing them to get bored for them to stop reading.

 

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Dragon Fusion

El was an average fifteen-year-old kid, who set out for a quiet walk in her small-town park to relax before having to conquer a book report. However, El never expected to see sparks fly out from her fingertips…

Totally blindsided, El learned the truth of her identity, realizing her whole life had been a lie, and she wasn’t sure she was ready for the upcoming changes.

El’s newfound powers frightened as well as excited her. Finding help from an unlikely ally, a dragon, El must decide if she should embrace her destiny or walk away from a world in peril. A spark begins to ignite within her. Will the fire which brews inside sway El in her decision to embrace her destiny?

 

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